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iQuJik_Beast's First Montage Success or Failure?


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Please click the link and tell me what
you think. Remember its my first montage
and my first time ever using a editing
program.
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I felt that you used too many unnecessary clips, which increased the length to the point where I became bored at points; e.g. is it really necessary to show you running away from two zombies? You also seemed to repeat many of your nade-throws, and mutagen is a no-no.
That said, I really enjoy your running style; it's incredibly smooth and seems very natural, but at the same time very effective.
Good job and good luck with future projects.

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Oh okay :/

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nice montage. but a bit too long... try to keep it in thr 4-5 minutes range

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It was good, but at the start you repeat same nade tricks.
It had good running :)


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Do's : Editing was good, i liked the music also.

Dont's : Dont show same nades, take out the parts that have no part in the montage. For example like your running doing moves when no one is chasing you.

GoodJob for the first one, I enjoyed.

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Nice, you did some random 3zombie runs which isn't necessary beside that i loved it :)

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Pro: Nice editing for first time
Had some good nades
Nice song but think i heard some before
Make another and try to improve

Con: too many unnecessary slow motion parts
Mutagen + Montage = Not Good ( Mutagen + Players = Noob)
Same nade tricks
too long, hard to stay interested

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I really liked it, but it was pretty long :/ and I don't want to be picky but I think, I don't know, but maybe mention the lights? Because some people may have epilepsy xD But overall, I really liked it.
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Not to be rude or anything but what really got me not to watch most of it was that you had a mutagen and were basically throwing grenades everywhere. Also in my opinion you used the velocity of the clip way too much. Overall its an ok montage. It was your first one so yeah. :blush:
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Sah much slow motion T_T
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If you beg nicely i may forgive you for using my song xD
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TOO_oo long, but it's a good montage.

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well you asked if it was a succes or fail. Honestly it is both. You used mutagen which makes it not to good. old nades, and some other things. But it is an ok montage for your first montage.

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I enjoyed the slow mo for some reason c: , but at some point you were just spamming nades everywhere. Nice montage overall.
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Good job for your first montage Scalice98 :biggrin:

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very nice! haha, & may i ask the names of the songs you used? :3

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Mutagen :/

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Just ____________ that much to long.

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Nice kill. 5:30-5:40. ,_,.





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